For another summer learning journey task we needed to copy the template to create an Haiku. We created this by using the 5 syllables 7 syllables and the 5 syllables again. We also drew the Christmas tree and the presents. I really enjoyed this task as well as it was really cool and fun to do.
Hi Aisea,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your blurb and it sounded like you had lots of fun making your Haiku Poems. I also liked how you drew a Christmas tree as it shows your creativity. Maybe next time try to add a little more into your explanation for the task at hand. Other than that your blurb and the idea you chose for your Haiku poem were really great. I liked how you chose Christmas as your topic because it shows relevancy. If you were to create another Haiku, what would the poem's topic be?
Great Job Aisea!
Kia ora Aisea
ReplyDeleteBen here again from the SLJ commenting team.
Beautiful poem e kare, and you’ve nailed the haiku structure, well done!
Judging by your poem, can I assume that you’re a Christian? It must be an especially important time for you as a Christian. Will you be at church on Christmas day?
Keep up the great work!
Mā te wā,
Benjamin